let me show u mine
id like to say some colorful things
but the kids are here
can we agree that we feel better
agreed
we screened our films
i teach filmmaking
my point is why isnt it a film
if ur script is inserted
in the typewriter clasped
on the roll
and u hold up ur typewriter
for us to see
a conceptual film
ur concept in the drum
roll please
smiles and claps
who wants to exhibit their film
u alone say ok
let me show u mine
u place the selectric
upside umop
on the pedestal
u place ur script atop
the selectric
unclean u say
my film is called unclean
“When I have a poem accepted by a magazine that prints so-called quality poetry, I ask myself where I have failed.”
— Charles Bukowski